1、You are an excellent boy. I appreciate what you have done in your handwriting and believe you will be successful on your study.
2、You are a clever girl. I appreciate your handwriting so much. Wish you make more improvement on your study.
3、If Xu juanxiu handwriting, clear and tidy structure, can not help but give people a feeling of fresh and refreshing, this point the teacher really should learn from you. Let us promote each other in the future Chinese learning, ok?
4、The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate. It is artistic to set off the mood of the characters through the description of the environment.
5、Close with an implicit theme
6、It ended a little too abruptly
7、from the scene to the end of the natural
8、The ending seems to be unfinished, and the beginning should be observed and described vividly
9、Start with feeling and end with feeling, which makes the article coherent before and after and at the same time makes the theme of the article repeat again and again and has a strong appeal
10、The article's opinion on... To the point of the article... The delicate and vivid portrayal of the lofty concept is admirable
11、The article's language is fresh and lively, and the description can capture the main features of things. The short and concise length is worth reading
12、The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of The Times, and doing the atmosphere of The Times.
13、The narrative is detailed and specific, the details are vivid and lifelike, the personalities of the characters are bright and prominent, and the images are plump and vivid.
14、The description of the environment is objective and true. The environment serves the character's character and better explains the ins and outs of the formation of character's character.
15、Poor planning and lack of clear priorities.
16、The focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the idea is clear.
17、Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, make people at a glance.
18、Although there is a central theme, the expression is not sufficient and powerful, the words are not real, empty and weak.
19、The subject is not serious enough, and there are dross in the thought.
20、Brief explanation of time, place and result...
21、The language is concise, standard, and the opening sentence is attractive.
22、The beginning of the scene is quite new; Flashback the beginning, rendering the mood.
23、... A brief description of the highlights; provide
24、Briefly describe the antecedents and pave the way.
25、Anthropomorphic language makes the article more lively.
26、The transition is natural and each paragraph is clearly explained.
27、This part refers to the examples in the text, the language is too flat, can be modified to make the language more vivid.
28、For... "Is a good metaphor.
29、The two main features of this article are to be detailed and concise, and to be born of the virtual and the real. The content is richer and more vivid.
30、The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, smooth and coherent in nature.
31、Rich examples, appropriate material selection, detailed and slightly appropriate description, more convincing.
32、The language is lively and humorous, making people laugh.
33、The language is too brief, as if written in outline, but fails to outline,
34、Articles that are complex but not messy can be detailed, concise and focused.
35、Skillfully use anthropomorphic techniques to make the objects in the article have the characteristics of human behavior and human thoughts and emotions, so that it can reflect the spiritual process of the protagonist in the article from the side.
36、The selection of material is bland, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, not new, and difficult to profoundly reflect the authenticity of life in times.
37、Be able to choose subjects with typical meanings in life and have strong representativeness of events.
38、The language of the article is easy to understand and close to the reality of life, which makes reading feel intimate. ... In a relaxed and happy tone, he spoke to us with an endless aftertaste.
39、Clear thinking, correct punctuation, complete structure, precise wording,
40、Can reflect the lively scene of the Spring Festival through specific examples.
——英语作文谚语 40句菁华
1、人凭志气，虎凭威势。
2、从善如登，从恶如崩。
3、志高品高，志下品下。
4、烈士暮年，壮心不已。
5、王婆卖瓜，自卖自夸。
6、三年清知府，十万雪花银。
7、佛烧一炷香，人争一口气。
8、打人不打脸，吃饭不夺碗。
9、猫鼠不同眠，虎鹿不同行。
10、穷人心肠好，富人心如刀。
11、鸟多不怕鹰，人多把山*。
12、龙无云不行，鱼无水不生。
13、出淤泥而不染，濯清涟而不妖。
14、老牛肉有嚼头，老人言有听头。
15、人必须有自信，这是成功的秘密。
16、偷来钱，两三天；血汗钱，万万年。
17、天上无云不下雨，世间无理事不成。
18、拼尽全力赢高考，苦尽干来齐欢笑。
19、既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程！
20、狐狸总要露尾巴，毒蛇总要吐舌头。
21、自己做错不算数，别人做错打**。
22、Who laughs last laughs best.
23、Time waits for fools who wander.
24、Without health, money is useless.
25、Man by his will, tiger by his power.
26、Force is strong, courage is frightening.
27、Only through hard work can we become good steel.
28、In his old age, the martyrs are full of ambition.
29、Trees attract great wind and suffer great calamity.
30、No cloud in the sky, no rain, no reason in the world.
31、Three years of Qing Zhifu, 100,000 snowflakes and silver.
32、Cats and mice sleep differently, tiger and deer do differently.
33、It is difficult to practise courage without taking three risks.
34、People must have self-confidence, which is the secret of success.
35、Ask the woodcutter for firewood and the official for boat sailing.
36、The fox always shows its tail and the snake always spits its tongue.
37、Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb.
38、It's hard to cover two ears with one hand and boarding two ships with one foot.
39、Everyone sees the advantage but not the harm. Fish sees the food but not the fishing.
40、Make every effort to win the college entrance examination and work hard to laugh together.
——英语作文 40句菁华
1、Knowledge makes humble, ignorance makes proud.
2、Learn to walk before you run.
3、Like a rat in a hole.
4、Like tree, like fruit.
5、Failure as a daily occurrence;
6、除了不诚实的人外，任何诚实的人都能得到蜂蜜，人人都这么想。
7、穿天鹅绒的老兵发现温度计的直径为一米。
8、作家在被子里十分*静地写白皮书。
9、人活着总是要得罪一些人的就要看那些人是否值得得罪。
10、生命虽短，爱却绵长。
11、你不会因为美丽去爱一个女人，但她却会因为你的爱而变得美丽。
12、好人越夸越好，坏人越夸越糟。
13、大多数主人对最前面的幽灵人质的敌对态度几乎到了极顶。
14、先生，你的鸟搅了我女友的生日聚会。
15、网中的湿宠物还没有登上喷气飞机。
16、不懂世故，幼稚可笑。
17、命里有时终需有命里无时莫强求。
18、天空没有翅膀的痕迹，而鸟儿已飞过。
19、爱是一盏永不昏暗的明灯。
20、我在宁静的宇宙飞船里踱步。
21、首犯的犯罪基本上与石灰和加班无关。
22、爱情的炽热胜过千万团的火。
23、爱很难投入，但一旦投入，便更难走出。
24、例如，我可以即刻知道该恒定距离。
25、Suggesting that one thing ... is better than another thing ... bears no more significance than insinuating that black is better than white .
26、人类正面临着一个严重的问题…，这个问题变得越来越严重。
27、失败乃成功之母。
28、俗话说(常言道)……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。
29、任何事物都是有两面性，…也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
30、…已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。
31、Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
32、Smoking has a great influence on our health.
33、Business may be troublesome,but idleness is pernicious.
34、Better master one than engage with ten.
35、On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
36、Although many people(believe)that…,I doubt whether the(argument)bears further(*ysis).虽然有许多人相信…，但我怀疑这个论点能否经得起进一步的推敲。
37、In my opinion,it is more advisable to do something than to do something.在我看来，做…比做…更明智。
38、As opposed to widely held belief,I believe that…与普遍接受的看法不同，我认为…
39、Some people think that….To be frank,I cannot agree with their opinion for the reasons below.一些人认为…，坦白地讲，我不赞同他们的观点，理由如下：
40、37)There is another reason why I cast my preference for…我倾向于…还有另外一个原因。
——英语谚语作文 40句菁华
1、人靠自修，树靠人修。
2、吃饭防噎，走路防跌。
3、宁失一事，不失一时。
4、不怕人不敬，就怕己不正。
5、你对人无情，人对你薄意。
6、做事循天理，出言顺人心。
7、好汉凭志强，好马凭胆壮。
8、宁可悔了改，不可做了悔。
9、工欲善其事，必先利其器。
10、打空拳费力，说空话劳神。
11、水落现石头，日久见人心。
12、留得青山在，不怕没柴烧。
13、砍柴砍小头，问路问老头。
14、老姜辣味大，老人经验多。
15、不要等待机会，而要创造机会。
16、冷，冷在风里，穷，穷在租里。
17、有理不在言高，有话说在面前。
18、有话说在明处，有药敷在痛处。
19、没有乡下泥腿，饿死城里油嘴。
20、胆大骑龙骑虎，胆小骑猫骑兔。
21、不怕吃饭拣大碗，就怕干活爱偷懒。
22、宁做穷人脚下土，不做财*上珍。
23、Better repent than repent.
24、Sharp tools make good work.
25、Cold, cold in the wind, poor, poor in rent.
26、Rigid is easy to break, soft is always there.
27、Eat to prevent choking, walk to prevent falling.
28、Harmony breeds wealth, adversity breeds disaster.
29、Interlaces are like mountains, but not separated.
30、You are merciless to others, but they are indifferent to you.
31、People start from their hearts and trees start from their roots.
32、A good man depends on his ambition and a good horse on his courage.
33、Better be the foot of the poor than the treasure chairman Shangzhen.
34、From thrift to luxury is easy, from luxury to frugality is difficult.
35、Niang Tong Niang, the road is long; Niang Tong Niang, the line is long.
36、Grown from sludge but unstained, posing elegantly without being flirtatious.
37、He who always wants to win must lose, and he who is not afraid of losing must win.
38、Water falls into stone, and people's hearts and minds grow with each passing day.
39、The frown is cold to the finger of a thousand men, and the bow is sweet to the cow.
40、You are advised to drink more wine, and there is no reason why the sun rises in the west.
——高级英语作文 50句菁华
1、seek替换want / look for
2、but替换very
3、appreciate 替换thank
4、on替换as soon as
5、have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself
6、be caught up in/be crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in
7、the other day替换a few days ago
8、in the course of替换during
9、consist of替换be made up of
10、nevertheless替换however
11、many a 替换many
12、a handful of替换a little / some
13、occasionally替换sometimes /once in while
14、for instance替换for example
15、seldom替换not often
16、贫瘠的 barren、infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plants cannot be planted on it) 代替poor (soil)
17、展示 demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people. ) 代替show
18、破坏：Impair、Undermine[这两个词指抽象意义上的破坏]、Jeopardize、Devastate 代替Break
19、好的Beneficial、Advantageous 代替Good
20、便宜的Economical、Inexpensive 代替Cheap
21、cornerstone 基石
22、cultural needs 文化需求
23、tear down 拆除
24、high-rise office buildings 高层写字楼
25、driving force 驱动力
26、destruct 破坏
27、burden 负担
28、symbol 象征
29、artistic standards 艺术水准
30、enjoy great popularity 广受欢迎
31、but 但是 by this time 此时
32、no doubt 无疑地 such as 正如
33、by doing so 如此 to sum up 总而言之
34、in fact 事实上 unlike 不像……；和……不同
35、in addition to… 除…之外 secondly 第二
36、at the same time同时；然而 luckily 幸运地
37、indeed 的确 third 第三；第三点
38、particularly特别地 unlike …不像……；和……不同
39、anyway 无论如何 in spite of 尽管……；虽然……
40、in particular 特别（地） soon 不久
41、eventually 最后 surely 无疑
42、at last 最后 therefore 因此
43、presently 现在；此刻 now 现在
44、first（ly）第一 in general 一般说来
45、after a while过了一会儿 therefore 因此；结果
46、巨大的、大的Massive、Colossal、Tremendous 代替Big
47、骇人的、丑陋的Hideous 代替Ugly
48、祖先Ancestor、Predecessor 代替Forefather
49、危险Peril、Hazard 代替Danger
50、在当今社会In contemporary society、In present-day society、In this day and age 代替In modern society
——想象作文评语 40句菁华
1、情节波折性较强，于*常之中生意外，能引起读者的注意。
2、情节变化*淡无奇，缺乏新意。
3、情节*直，毫无悬念，*铺直叙似记流水账。
4、构思不合常理，内容漏洞百出，不能反映生活的真实。
5、适当地运用对比比较等手法，通过事物相互间的悬殊与差异，有力地佐证文章的中心。
6、选材过于通俗，不具一定的代表性，老题材老思想，*淡无奇。
7、能够选择生活中具有典型意义的题材，事件的代表性较强。
8、关心生活，关注社会，并不是成年人的特权。通过这一篇《意外》看得出来，在你的心中，不仅装盛着童真和书本、学校，而更多的是不尽的关注社会的心事。这一篇文字，一波三折，尤其心理描写很突出，结尾的议论升华了文章的主题。
9、想象大胆奇特，充满童真童趣是这篇习作的特点，同时，行文从“功能”到“外形”，颇有条理。例如：文中“先来说说它的功能”、“再来说说它的外形”。
10、小作者以丰富的想象力、极具新意的构思。运用动作描写、语句描写、心理描写等将小熊历险的全过程呈现在纸上。行文思路清晰，值得其他同学学习与借鉴。
11、能过合理的想象，反映出意味深长的哲理，…行文流畅，简洁，充分发挥了自己的想像力，是一篇不错的…文章清逸婉丽，流畅连贯，尤其人物语言幽默风趣，再加上一些精妙词语的.使用，无形中为文章增添了不少情趣。
12、本文在故事情节上或许并无特别之吸引人之处，但仍不失为一篇成功之作，其一，较好地刻画了角色的形象，其二语言生动丰富，生活气息浓，起到了良好的表情达意之效果
13、全文叙事集中，不枝不蔓，语言朴实流畅，感情真挚感人。
14、全文酣畅淋漓，一气呵成，蕴藏着欢乐与期盼，真挚感人、开头出手不凡。
15、本文以…为线索，使用权文章连贯，流畅，衔接自然，同时，通过前后具体事例的对比、抨击了……，文章语言生动丰富，可读性强。
16、文章很有说服力，也发人深思、从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。
17、本文取材真实生活，选材恰当，很有新意，段落分明，过渡自然，情趣盎然，可读性强。
18、本文是一篇较为成熟的叙事明理之作，文章以准确流畅的语言，展示了实验的全过程，跌宕起伏，妙趣横生、小作者观察仔细，叙述时井然有序。
19、借景抒情，托物咏志，很特色。
20、文章在民间传说的基础上，进行合理想象和生动描述，演绎出一篇精彩的童话故事，读来饶有趣味。
21、…要求通过虚构的故事来表达一种哲理。
22、文章有理有据，说服力强，突出人物个性，上下文过渡自然，条理清晰，首尾照应，结尾点题，突出中心思想。
23、涉世不深的少年走近复杂的社会，这本身就是一种睿智。本文语言*实而柔与，描写很随意，似乎引领读者在心灵的原野上漫步。不足是议论略感缺乏棱角。要知道，精粹的议论可起到画龙点睛的作用，会使你的本文更加深刻。继续练笔，你会更出色!
24、本文无论是思想性还是艺术性都是很高的，读后让人久久回味。构思巧妙，运用对比手法，深化了主题;情节也颇具匠心，整个故事既出人意料之外，又在情理之中。语言朴实无华，采用白描手法，作者的爱憎包含在叙述之中，能让读者去体会，去深思。
25、太棒了!你的本文，再现了东北人的憨直爽朗，使读者顿感神清气爽。语言流畅至极，通感运用尤为巧妙。你的笔锋具有征服力与感染力。努力，再创辉煌!
26、你是个很有主见又不乏真知的学生，对你的观点我十分认同，但如果行文安排中结构再紧凑些，那就是锦上添花了。
27、如许娟秀的字迹，清晰严整的结构，不由给人以耳目一新的感觉，这一点老师真的应该向你学习。就让我们在今后的语文学习中互相促进好吗?
28、可以说你的本文充满了真情实感。人嘛，失败在所难免，有勇气能面对失败就更加难能可贵。我相信是金子，总会有闪光之时。希望你尽快调整心态，你将会发现天空更加湛蓝。
29、这篇文章充满了激情，从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰，语句流畅。
30、小作者以丰富的想象力、极具新意的`构思。向我们介绍了未来摩托车的形状与功能，暗示出科技创新的重要性，希望在小作者的努力下，未来摩托车能早日应用到现实生活中。
31、这是一篇想象的文章，小作者通过想象自己是一颗星星会怎样做，表达了表达了自己为人类做贡献的愿望。文章语言清新活泼，内容生动丰富，是一篇成功的习作。
32、虽为一件小事，但作者却描述得有声有色，结尾处不可或缺的点晴之笔。
33、小作者以丰富的想象力、极具新意的构思。向我们描绘了湖水不幸的遭遇，对游客乱扔垃圾的行为和工作人员置之不理的态度进行讽刺，同时对环卫工人的做法进行礼赞，并在文末呼吁大家保护环境。
34、前后内容关联不够紧密，部分内容过于孤立，与文章主体联系不够密切。
35、观点明确，好恶立场分明，使人一目了然。
36、中心不够明确，立意不够清晰。
37、这是一篇很有新意的想象作文，文章构思巧妙，语言朴实自然。
38、本文以…为线索，使用权文章连贯，流畅，衔接自然，同时，通过前后具体事例的对比。抨击了……，文章语言生动丰富，可读性强。
39、文章很有说服力，也发人深思。从写作上来说，情节生动，文章有波澜，读起来深受教益。
40、文章凭着丰富的想象，凭着多彩的语言，将未来的笔呈现读者面前。
——英语作文中常用的名言 40句菁华
1、生活便是寻求新的知识。
2、越学习，越发现自己的无知。
3、人的价值蕴藏在人的才能之中。
4、没有大胆的猜测就作不出伟大的发现。
5、泉水，奋斗之路越曲折，心灵越纯洁。
6、青年时种下什么，老年时就收获什么。
7、只要你想要学习，无论年纪多大都不算晚。
8、一个人最大的破产是绝望，最大的资产是希望。
9、人需要真理，就像瞎子需要明快的引路人一样。
10、在每个星光陨落的晚上，一遍一遍数我的寂寞。
11、生命多少用时间计算，生命的价值用贡献计算。
12、美丽的蓝图，落在懒汉手里，也不过是一页废纸。
13、读的书如果超过一万卷，你写字的时候就会有精神。
14、美必须和实际生活有一定的距离，让人有想象的余地。
15、科学的每一项巨大成就，都是以大胆的幻想为出发点的。
16、海浪的品格，就是无数次被礁石击碎又无数闪地扑向礁石。
17、生活因为背负苦难而变得坚实，人生因为坎坷而成就多彩。
18、即使道路坎坷不*，车轮也要前进；即使江河波涛汹涌，船只也航行。
19、我*生从来没有做过一次偶然的发明。我的一切发明都是经过深思熟虑，严格试验的结果。
20、Without bold speculation has made a great discovery.
21、Without great difficulty, there would be no great cause.
22、Is man's duty to be courageous enough to seek for truth.
23、A person's value lies in his talent, not in his clothing.
24、I will take fate by the throat, it won't make me give in.
25、Through the sea of hone, smooth pebble became more beautiful.
26、There is no real fool in this world, only willing to be a fool.
27、Don't find excuses for failure, only to find grounds for success.
28、People need to be the truth, just like the blind need lively lead.
29、The most easy thing in the world, the delay time is the least effort.
30、There are a lot of people is the cost of the successful youth happiness.
31、Read books if more than ten thousand volumes, you write will have spirit.
32、When I turned into a dusty unconventionally, this is difficult to define.
33、I like to leave people traffic lane, and rugged walk is fraught with risk.
34、Spring, the road of struggle, the more twists and turns, the more pure soul.
35、Beautiful blueprint, fall at the hand of idlers, but also is a sheet of paper.
36、Life is more difficult, the more I feel stronger, even is also more intelligent.
37、No longer indulge, on the road to success, refused to mediocrity from the beginning!
38、The honor of a man's virtue honor I don't know how many times larger than his wealth.
39、The character of the waves, is the countless times are reef smash and countless flash fell on the rock.
40、Climb the top of the mountain foot stronger, born in purpose to cheer the will of the hero and not a true man unless he comes to the Great Wall.
——英语作文谚语万能句子 40句菁华
1、从善如登，从恶如崩。
2、宁可认错，不可说谎。
3、心要常操，身要长劳。
4、谷要自长，人要自强。
5、人横有道理，马横有缰绳。
6、千金难买心，万金不卖道。
7、天无一月雨，人无一世穷。
8、失去健康，钱再多也没用。
9、宁救百只羊，不救一条狼。
10、拍马有个架，先笑后说话。
11、病好不谢医，下次无人医。
12、只有千锤百炼，才能成为好钢。
13、吃人家的嘴短，拿人家的手软。
14、胆大走遍天下，胆小寸步难行。
15、一手难遮两耳风，一脚难登两船。
16、自己选择的路，跪着也要走下去。
17、No lie, no crop.
18、不畏浮云遮望眼，只缘身在最高层。
19、横眉冷对千夫指，俯首甘为孺子牛。
20、狐狸总要露尾巴，毒蛇总要吐舌头。
21、药农进山见草药，猎人进山见禽兽。
22、Give me a sweet date with a slap.
23、The ruler is short and the inch is long.
24、Beauty is not in appearance, but in mind.
25、Good is like climbing, evil is like falling.
26、Don't talk at random, don't rush at anything.
27、If you suffer bitterly, you will be a good man.
28、If water does not flow, it is not reasonable to say so.
29、Not to live on the same day, but to die on the same day.
30、Rationality is in the matter, good steel is in the edge.
31、You can't be afraid of things if you don't recognize people.
32、Gu should grow up by himself, and man should strengthen himself.
33、Poor clothes are simple, worry about charcoal, wish cold weather.
34、Foot is not afraid of shoe crooked, heart is not afraid of thunder.
35、Better be the foot of the poor than the treasure chairman Shangzhen.
36、If you are ill, thank the doctor. Next time there will be no doctor.
37、It's hard for a man to sail, but hard for his hands to hide his eyes.
38、Civilian officers have three hands and military officers have four legs.
39、Don't fear the clouds to cover your eyes, only because you are at the top.
40、People are afraid of losing their ambition and trees are afraid of losing their bark.
——英语谚语类作文 40句菁华
1、人起心发，树起根发。
2、水滴石穿，坐食山空。
3、看佛警僧，看父警子。
4、穷人的汗，富人的饭。
5、人是实的好，姜是老的辣。
6、菜无心必死，人无心必亡。
7、虎瘦雄心在，人穷志不短。
8、走不完的路，知不完的理。
9、鼓不敲不响，理不辩不明。
10、枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家。
11、不要轻言放弃，否则对不起自己！
12、一口吃不成胖子，一步跨不到天边。
13、一寸光阴一寸金，寸金难买寸光阴。
14、伶俐人一拨三转，糊涂人棒打不回。
15、千里莺啼绿映红，水村山郭酒旗风。
16、接天莲叶无穷碧，映日荷花别样红。
17、看人挑担不吃力，自己挑担步步歇。
18、No pains, no gains.
19、Joy is health, depression is pain.
20、Better call money a loss than a loss.
21、The drums are silent and unreasonable.
22、There are thousands of roads, only one.
23、An endless road leads to an endless truth.
24、A Golden Nest is better than a silver nest.
25、Better lose one thing than lose one moment.
26、No man is a good man unless he is tempered.
27、Imagination is more important than knowledge.
28、Be lenient to people and strict with yourself.
29、The rope is sawn and the dripping stones pierce.
30、Don't give up, or you'll be sorry for yourself!
31、If you fall for it, you will have a bright heart.
32、Old horses know the way, old people know the world.
33、Listening at the same time is clear, but belief is dark.
34、Not to live on the same day, but to die on the same day.
35、The more you play, the lazier you are, the more you eat.
36、Old trees withered vines, crows, bridges and watery homes.
37、If you are not afraid of mountains, you are afraid of feet.
38、Wearing a three-foot clothes, you can speak without hesitation.
39、There are days that cannot go, there is no barrier that cannot go.
40、An inch of time and an inch of gold make it difficult to buy an inch of time.
——高中作文评语 40句菁华
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